Thursday, December 8, 2011

Waiting Fool(not anymore)-3



Her dream never came true! Spring bloomed and cherished with their closeness, togetherness and friendliness. Summer, autumn and winter went speedily. They shared their hidden secrets, personal emotions and true feelings with each other. Then there were all those regular talks on phone and they talked for so long so that when their friends wanted to call them, the phone responded ‘Busy Network’ so they were called BNC-Busy Network Couple. But they just weren’t love couple yet.

The time she knew him was late summer and now its near to spring. The colorful calendar next to her showed the month, February. The month of lovers and love finally was here. Her phone ring toned ‘One in a million’ when it was 00:01.

 ‘Hell-ooo’, she yawned.
‘I l-o-v-e you!’ answered an active voice from the other end.
It’s him she thought. I may mishear others’ voice but his voice is unmistaken. He has those compelling and convincing voice unlike any other men. It’s him! Him…….
‘Uh-uh……’ She was lost into those three words.
‘I love you. I know it sounds cheesy, but I am in love with you.’
She was totally lost.
‘Hey! Are you gonna kill me with nervousness?’
‘What? No! I mean yee-yess………..I have been in love with you. Unknowingly, I am madly and completely in love with you. I can’t believe what you’ve just said. Is it for real? I mean did I hear it right?’
Her voice trembled and shook little with joy. Joy-trembling voice.
‘Yes, that’s what I just said. I am ignorantly, childishly and crazily in love with you.’
‘I still can’t believe you said that.’
‘I love you. Dear, I can’t promise you to be there with you 24/7 but you can count on me as I’ll always be there right next to you when you need me. I can’t promise you with bringing down stars and moon for you but I’ll always try to bring smile on your face. I can’t guarantee you that we won’t argue but we will argue because arguments will make us stronger.’

After that call, she couldn’t sleep well. No, she couldn’t sleep at all! She was too happy to fall asleep and her bad dream never turned into reality. She was waiting fool but now she is not waiting. Her wait is finally over. She wasn’t fool after all to wait for the man who looked terrific in black.

4 comments:

  1. "She wasn't fool after all to wait for the man who looked terrific in black". Nice touch at the end. That was good.

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  2. wow!!!!!!!
    mote k ho yesto !!!!!!!!
    hehe

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  4. it was fun reading your writing!!! i went through waiting fool 1 n 2 i thought this 3 would be d revenge or would say i won't wait anymore for d looser like u but it was unbelievably awesome which completely make my thought false!!! is it for real??? i mean if it is then congrats!!! nice 1!!!! =D

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